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  Please write: show but not tell.

  by compound complex in

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  greetings, fellow posters!.

  movies can easily show emotion on an actor's face, or depict what he's thinking by his actions.

  not so easily in writng.

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  nancy drew

  Everyone is really fired up keep writing more ....
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  Please write: show but not tell.

  by compound complex in

  1. social
  2. humour

  greetings, fellow posters!.

  movies can easily show emotion on an actor's face, or depict what he's thinking by his actions.

  not so easily in writng.

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  nancy drew
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  M.C. Grammar ( Ode To CoCo)

  by rip van winkle in

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  one man, so complex, oh dear, coco.

  .. the heavens are missing their brightest of stars!.

  .. he's chock full of coffee and nominal phrases,.

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  nancy drew

  One dark and stormy night from out of nowhere came a light

  around the room some creatures crept they stole her notebook as she slept

  the notebook now was in their grip they gathered round it on their ship

  their big eyes clued with concentration but oh it lacked some puncuation

  the aliens now began to clammer the notebook used improper grammar

  and so the notebook was destroyed invasion they would now avoid

  oh yes the earth was saved that night because the grammar wasn't right
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  Me Before and After leaving the Lie

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  when i was serving as an elder.

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  now.

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  nancy drew

  What a Happy Picture you look great
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  View From a Dock

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  aslant a tarn there dies an oak.

  ne'er was meant to edge a pool .

  nor shade a verdure plush, but, .

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  nancy drew

  a very good morning it seems
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  M.C. Grammar ( Ode To CoCo)

  by rip van winkle in

  1. social
  2. humour

  one man, so complex, oh dear, coco.

  .. the heavens are missing their brightest of stars!.

  .. he's chock full of coffee and nominal phrases,.

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  nancy drew

  CoCo writes a word or two

  something old and something new

  His puncuation has a style

  with grammar he can sure beguile

  He whips up stories like meringue

  and maybe use interrobang (he did what !?)

  your words are like a rack of lamb

  when mine resemble diced up spam

  so keep on serving us your best

  but don't give us a grammar test
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  M.C. Grammar ( Ode To CoCo)

  by rip van winkle in

  1. social
  2. humour

  one man, so complex, oh dear, coco.

  .. the heavens are missing their brightest of stars!.

  .. he's chock full of coffee and nominal phrases,.

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  nancy drew

  Let the games begin
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  View From a Dock

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  aslant a tarn there dies an oak.

  ne'er was meant to edge a pool .

  nor shade a verdure plush, but, .

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  nancy drew

  The oaks and elms are on their way

  they left one bright and sunny day

  no message scribbled on the ground

  just shards of bark was all we found

  come back to us oh lovely trees

  but off they went to see the bees
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  "Writing . . . is a lonely life."

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  "writing, at its best, is a lonely life.

  organizations for writers palliate the writer's loneliness but i doubt if they improve his writing.

  he grows in public stature as he sheds his loneliness and often his work deteriorates.

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  nancy drew

  New Hope and Happiness

  Don't encourage me I'm barely under control
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  What are you reading right now??

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  i am reading "stranger in a strange land" by robert a. heinlein.

  i read it over 20 years ago.

  now i am reading it from a completely different perspective.

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  nancy drew

  I'm reading

  Ancient technology in Peru and Bolivia by David Hatcher Childress

  God Games by Beil Freer

  The lost book of Enki by Zecharia Sitchin

  Genesis of the cosmos by Paul La Violette